Sunday, October 6, 2013

11:00pm

I'm swept away by your stars
falling on my secret
yes
how clever, the flesh
becoming ripe as summer peach
in your hands.

m&n

whirl
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10 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 6, 2013 at 1:55 PM

    stars&secrets&scent all over the place...

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  2. Laurie KolpOctober 6, 2013 at 2:30 PM

    Your brevity speaks volumes.

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  3. brenda wOctober 6, 2013 at 3:07 PM

    This is fantastic. I'm in complete agreement with Laurie.

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  4. Old EggOctober 6, 2013 at 7:53 PM

    Each reader will read something different in this, but to me it was exotically erotic.

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  5. Kelly (aka Toasterpoet)October 6, 2013 at 9:24 PM

    Gorgeous and sensual! The placement of that "yes" is perfect.

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  6. UnknownOctober 7, 2013 at 2:22 PM

    Hi Laurie, Ty!

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  7. UnknownOctober 7, 2013 at 2:23 PM

    Brenda Ty.

    Dear OLd Egg, that is what is love about poetry. Ty

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  8. UnknownOctober 7, 2013 at 2:24 PM

    Ty, so much Kelly, that word was a last minute additon.

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  9. hyperCRYPTICalOctober 10, 2013 at 1:08 AM

    Superb.
    Anna :o]

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  10. UnknownOctober 10, 2013 at 7:00 AM

    Ty, Anna!

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Love to read your positve-heartfelt thoughts.

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