Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Ache of Control

The dilliance was to be a mild digress
yet each time he remembers her soft hands
and softer heart, he cringes at the thought
of the imperious blunder he has made
due to his ego and own ripening feelings.

Mishla


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9 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 11, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    Thinking Victorian today after reading an early novel by Sylvia Day.

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  2. Sheilagh LeeSeptember 11, 2013 at 3:37 PM

    love this verse

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  3. Old EggSeptember 11, 2013 at 5:44 PM

    Men are insensitive (sometimes) it is in their nature, let's hope she gives him a second chance. (May I suggest dalliance instead of diliance?)

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  4. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 12, 2013 at 3:42 AM

    That's quite erotic. Not something I expected with those three words.

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  5. Anya PadyamSeptember 12, 2013 at 7:24 AM

    Awesome title; very nice use of the prompt words

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  6. UnknownSeptember 12, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    Ty, Sheliagh!

    Hi Old Egg, A double TY!

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  7. UnknownSeptember 12, 2013 at 8:10 AM

    Good to know J. Newberry, TY.


    Anya, Ty so very much!

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  8. humbirdSeptember 12, 2013 at 8:41 AM

    It's so true. Our ego - always on the way of creativity and open heart.

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  9. UnknownSeptember 13, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    So true HB, so true.

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Love to read your positve-heartfelt thoughts.

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