Wednesday, December 11, 2013

winterfemme

She turns over
a felled tree

she may
submit
or
sink

into the deep snow
of this

breathless
moist
glowing past
the other snowflakes

her need to be used
highlights winter's
need to use

mn

III

10 comments:

  1. vulnerability, is so beautiful at times.

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  2. How easy it is to give the natural world feelings to somehow accept the vagaries of its behavior. We admire its beauty and gentleness and endure its anger with stoicism.

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  3. That completes it.... a great write this.. and a wonderful message..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/12/nothing-extra-ordinary-about-it-3ww.html

    RS:)

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  4. That last paragraph is captivating..coldness and winter is changed into something magical and dark..

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  5. dear old egg - your comment is a lovely slice of prose - ty.

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  6. hi jae rose! thank you for your seeing.

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  7. 'her need to be used' ~ good she has such a need...at first we don't know what it is in us for others...so one need to be careful to not destroy this gift inside by accidentally giving wrong part or shortly - making wrong choice...

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