Wednesday, October 16, 2013

for granted

my tongue intesifies
in daunting what ifs and only you,
as I watch you pale, placid face,
mesmerized as your fastidious
lips render me helpless.


mn

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9 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 16, 2013 at 10:30 AM

    the good lover sometimes distant lover....ah well.

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  2. Sheilagh LeeOctober 16, 2013 at 1:00 PM

    very well written

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  3. Laurie KolpOctober 16, 2013 at 2:34 PM

    sensuous

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  4. Old EggOctober 17, 2013 at 2:03 AM

    They mustn't overdo the licking otherwise you think you are getting a wash rather than a come on.

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  5. UnknownOctober 17, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    Ty, Shelia.
    Ty, Laurie.
    Ty Old Egg.

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  6. Jae RoseOctober 17, 2013 at 11:11 AM

    Sometimes distant lovers hold more mystery..beautifully and succinctly captured..

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  7. UnknownOctober 18, 2013 at 2:29 PM

    so true, Jae Rose.

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  8. Tracy CrenshawOctober 19, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    Lovely. I adored the line 'mesmerized as your fastidious/ lips render me helpless.' Really powerful poem.

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  9. UnknownOctober 20, 2013 at 11:30 AM

    Ty. Tracy

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Love to read your positve-heartfelt thoughts.

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